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Goodbye. by ~n64player:iconn64player:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Philosophical > Spoken Word


It has to be your way doesn't it.
I'll never get my ideas heard
because they'll never amount to yours.

I'm sure you've heard, "Enough is enough"?
No? Of course not, anyone who isn't you
isn't worth hearing.

You have the ideal image
and the ideal sense of style.
Everyone knows you're perfect.

Life must be amazing
when no rules apply to you
because you're in charge of the world.

An endless supply of servants,
all willing to do your bidding.
Remember, they're not allowed to do anything if it isn't for you.

Time and time again
I try to talk to you
with no avail.

But then I remember
that I'm not you.
I'm not perfect.

The light of day I am not given.
Not even a glance in my direction.
I do believe our time is up then.

          ~ Goodbye.
©2009-2010 ~n64player
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Author's Comments

Ever meet someone who is so conceited? So self-centred that you can't even talk to them? This is one of those experiences.

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:icontaneer:
~Taneer Aug 11, 2009, 4:36:59 PM
You have definitely taken to a new style of ranting. I like it. Very nice.

Also, yes. I have. And I'd like for them to grow an extendo-neck just so they can kiss their own ass.

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90% of people on dA put fake statistics in their sig. Put this in your sig if you never have and never will.

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:iconn64player:
~n64player Aug 19, 2009, 4:17:11 PM
Haha, what are the chances of that happening?

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For truth and pickles!
:icontaneer:
~Taneer Aug 22, 2009, 10:47:55 PM
I bet if I could get them unconscious for long enough I could probably surgically remove all the joints in their neck and replace them with rubber bands.

Though, 80% chance says someone dies.

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90% of people on dA put fake statistics in their sig. Put this in your sig if you never have and never will.

[link]
:iconlachannel:
~Lachannel Jul 12, 2009, 8:06:29 AM
Oh, wow that was incredible. ;-;

Seriously, didn't know you can write something that can hit someone so deep. :] Gratz, Chris. :3

I used to love someone like that who said he 'loved me.' :P Terrible choice. I have empathy for you, dear. ^3^
:iconn64player:
~n64player Jul 12, 2009, 4:49:30 PM
Haha, unfortunately we meet these people quite regularly. So stay on your toes.

And thanks for the :+fav:! :)

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For truth and pickles!
:iconlachannel:
~Lachannel Jul 12, 2009, 5:13:27 PM
And you're very welcome. :D
:iconridewarrior:
~rideWARRIOR Jul 11, 2009, 9:49:15 PM
...huh ?

D:
whendidyoustartwriting ?
:iconn64player:
~n64player Jul 11, 2009, 9:54:58 PM
Haha, I sometimes do this when I have spare time, either on scrap paper or on my computer; most of them are just crappy rants though. This is like one of the only ones that made it here.

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For truth and pickles!
:iconridewarrior:
~rideWARRIOR Jul 11, 2009, 9:59:28 PM
Huh .

/we didn't know you wrote stuff
:iconn64player:
~n64player Jul 11, 2009, 10:01:08 PM
Yeah, that's fine. Not many people do. :)

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For truth and pickles!
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